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The slow slip into oblivion is not the
gentle fall into the arms of a lover.
It is the grasping pull of the earth,
yawning and swallowing
it devours mercilessly

as if we were something small
and insubstantial. Our digestion
barely leaves a trace. We are not meant
as a main course, and here we thought
ourselves as masters of the food chain.

It is really our lacking nourishment
that leaves us at the top.
We who barely leave an aftertaste.
The earth still claims us,
an appetiser if nothing else.

We are marked for destruction.
©2008-2009 =thewesternwoods
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:iconfierakai:
wow.
insightful. imagery is nice. Voice is authoritative. Tone is throroughly convinced that the human race will die soon.
I like it.

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Teagan
:iconthewesternwoods:
Thanks for your comment :)

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconsaintlydark:
This piece is so perfect right now, my mind is so focused on the questions which you danced through with such easy.. I have a lot more contemplating to do after reading this piece. Wonderful, wonderful.

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“One piece of his heart for every tear she granted..”
:iconmellifluousity:
Haha, didn't even mean to read anything when I came on here but saw the opening lines to this and had to carry on. Love the tenuous links, very wry...

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"You've never been in love, thats why all your songs are about military hardware"
:iconviviphalloids:
That would make a beautiful opening for a catastrophic movie genre lol.
its splendid and full. this is the end

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Create your pain, design your wound
watch the fresh blood drain
from your skin and from your vains.
This art can take you far
once it becomes a scar.
The agony you endured
and the beauty of this scar,
will make you a star...
:iconnefex:
That was really good, the writing was fantastic, but the concept was interesting too. :)
:iconlnin9:
wow!!!

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To love someone is to isolate him from the world, wipe out every trace of him, dispossess him of his shadow, drag him into a murderous future. It is to circle around the other like a dead star and absorb him into a black light.
Jean Baudrillard
:iconbenislionheart:
I think the same, it's terrible. Wonderfully executed.
:iconmizamour:
Amazing.

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“Rather than asking ‘Who am I?’ we
might ask, ‘In how many ways can I be myself?’ Rather
than asking ‘What is my place in the world?’ the
question might be better put, ‘In how many ways can I
experience a sense of belonging to the world?’”

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