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I peel through the layers of your epidermis,
slowly, like a lover reeling from their first
caustic embrace.
Then tenderly, so lovingly, I move the flesh, until
your ribs are exposed, proud and bleeding red.


And even though your eyes are dull
(I doubt that they can focus) I still move respectfully,
careful not to hurt you. I've never ever hurt you.
And then! A tap, a snap, a crack as
your ribs bend outwards, disconnected and free.


(I think I hear you moan in lust,
then again it could be me.)


Then my prize, those rare heaving organs;
pumped full and fat with blood.
I lean my mouth to have a taste, just a little,
just this once
and now maybe I'll slip inside of you
whilst you're still warm.


whilst you're still warm.
©2006-2009 =thewesternwoods
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:iconsanuke-okumatzu:
That's morbidly obese....... XD Erm.....sick....good but sick...
:iconthewesternwoods:
Yeah, I kind of have this thing for wanting to shock people lately. I want people to like it because it's well written, but be uneasy because of the content. Thanks for your comment. :)

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconanna-bella:
Very morbid and beautiful. I love it. :+fav:
:iconthewesternwoods:
Thank you, and thanks so much for the :+fav: It means a lot to me! :hug:

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconsanuke-okumatzu:
Hmm.. no offense, but could be better written. Though, ya' did a good job on the shock part. heh
:iconthewesternwoods:
Yeah I know, don't think I did too bad for a five minute thing though, haha.

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM
:iconsaintlydark:
God damn it! That is very well done, very well done indeed. I enjoyed it a lot, I have a smile by the end of the piece.. and that is a feat. You took a very beautiful thing, such as love, and wrapped it in a skin of morbid beauty. Did I say I enjoyed it?

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“One piece of his heart for every tear she granted..”
:iconthewesternwoods:
Thanks! :) you reacted the way that I wanted people to react. Thanks for your comment, it means a lot to know that you enjoyed it. :hug:

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'Forever we'll be crucified to a dream' HIM

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